Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Bleeding One Spot In Gums

Chapters 2 and 3 Female Detective First

something Jeje nochecita just finished the script of the cap of BF with some difficulty there is no great problem, but here I leave two caps from the old version of Female Detective.
I'm seriously considering leaving a few weeks without updating Blue Fairy, and I think I will after this chapter for the following reasons.
1. I have not had time While reviewing the scripts when I finish recording and when I noticed several mistakes that I have to correct at the last minute.
2. I want to make the final chapters of Blue Fairy with voices and although I try not to make two scripts a week to go ahead is always unexpected.
3. Tulio Ramirez, who is the actor who plays the voice of Duncan Lanford has passed his examination and next year will be domestic. Still do not know if in Caracas and will continue to do their practices out if this happens Fandubs can not work in good time and I would like to find another voice to Duncan so I have to overtake to the scripts if you have to go.
4. I was invited to a contest of Manga and I really would like to participate with a story but I have time I have to work extra with Blue fairy (that also is rainy season and if it rains I have to turn off the pc forces) and even I was planning a new story the process will take time and now I have almost to devote to it so I'll have to use one of my old stories and try to participate. The odds of winning are really low but good try.
5. I'm judge and organizer of a contest Sims series and although I have tried to end BF truth I have no desire to see something so they always put off the time you take off will be to analyze these series and deliver results.

so those are my reasons, I think part of this chapter that is on 14 I'll take a break to finish the scripts of BF to the final chapter, review these Sims series for the competition draw for this competition so I think that BF will have at least 2 weeks. Please do not want questions when there will be new chapter that I will not answer.
Well no more for now here I leave the caps 2 and 3 of the first version

FD

cap2: what is Murasa? Shari

looked through your laptop, the results of their search under the name Muras, "nothing" the only thing I had found were pornographic pages (perhaps not looking for something that happens to them and only found pornography and not actually looking ¬ ¬) and travel to a mountain, nothing to do with his quest that she needed, I was exhausted and it was night, the department was comfortable Donca indeed, was neat, the comfortable chair was a good place when you live alone and single, Donca slept on the couch and let Shari use his bed is occasion indeed was a good friend, but for Donca, Shari wanted to be more than that, Shari was no fool, knew that Donca felt attracted to her, but did not want to have an office romance not after what happened to Master.
Gorge Master, he was a really attractive, intelligent full of confidence in himself the perfect candidate for marriage, but Shari who was his last girlfriend was an independent girl and willing to progress, George knew perfectly well that her ability and began had underestimated, which Macbride Shari does not like and so they parted, now trying by all means to regain her love and affection, but she no longer wanted anything to do with it. Shari
decided to stretch and relax, this new case intrigued, more than anyone could imagine, this man knew, knew of his abilities, that is why he had sought, but she did not know exactly what I was looking for. decided to sleep to clear your mind.

A man from the shadows, watching a few wigs, masks and clothing, was when I get the man in the raincoat and sat the little chair that was next.

  • what happened? "I ask the man in the shadows
  • 's dead, wanted to stop by the hospital physician, but alacanse in a detective agency
  • " detective agency?
  • if, called the blue rose
  • does the blue rose? e never heard that
  • agency should not be known, well anyway he is dead, you can not say anything
  • not ...- not really hear the ring of a telephone and shadow man replied "what if?
  • Mary-Ane are here
  • are you all here? How do you know?
  • got a phone call from the bank, he seems to Rominett Julitte account was changed to U.S.
  • ought not receive the call tu-sentenced
  • what apparently was the manager was new and saw my number do?
  • 'll have to tinker with Mary-Ane denuevo. he seems to damn did not want to leave their roots, then hung
  • denuevo That girl asked the man in the raincoat
  • if je I thought not see it after 10 years, but that puts at risk However, you better get to work you know what to do?
  • je, I dunno, I can not read your mind
  • is true my friend, about the detective agency will better keep researching, do not want anybody in my business do you stay clear?
  • if ...
  • I will go to a small social call

Shari next day woke up earlier than usual, when he saw using the computer Donca intrigued by what he had found

Shari .- What are you doing? Donca
.- Check the page ... Shari
pornographic .- .- ¬ ¬
Donca course not> _ \u0026lt;I do not mean that
Shari .- entonses? Donca .- Section
other searches
Shari .- that is? Donca
OO .- rightly did not find anything ^ ^
Shari .- I am not a computer genius like you, tell me .... Donca
.- not really take a genius, look I found the word Muras, is a story from years ago is about a woman Mary-Ane Roberts, this woman made escape more than the Shari
Haudini was a magician OO .- .-
Donca course not, there was a double asecinato done in the restaurant Murasa years ago, the boyfriend of Mary-Ane and an unknown, he seems to po drug was a fight, I believe the groom he had antesedentes but Mary-Ane was strange because she had nothing to duty or fear, makes us good money to kill not think
Shari .- something does not match, if she escaped as he did not think the police were so stupid for not hayarla , especially since she had no where to go
Donca .- Do you want to investigate? Shari
.- no, let me do it for now, I have to make a visit to Master, he must learn more about the case we
Donca .- Shari there's more ... Shari
.- What? Donca
.- according to the report before he left, Mary-Ane Shari won the lottery
.- is a joke .. Donca .-
not, look, "said showing him photo-luck .- Shari
much for my taste, Donca, I want you to Winther Town, while I go to Masters, the policemen investigating the evidence in the case, all you get, a man died in my office and do not want there to be more deaths by the man in raincoat.
Docan .-
annotated aware

Shari came to the police department, you have not entered anything, but given that the case was new files only the police could give more information case.

Activity and several looked as he entered the office of Master, while looking at some papers they were on your desktop
Master .- Shari, what a surprise, knowing that would have accommodated vendiras
Shari office .- if clear. I came here for one case .- Master
and not heard of a dog gone
Shari .- jo jo funny, did not come from dogs, I came by Mary-Ane-Masters Roberts is silent and his eyes hardened
Master .- this woman escaped justice so long ... 10 years why your interest in it? Shari .-
not tell you, I just need a record of when she was involved in the double asecinato
Master .- again wonder why? Shari
.- I'll do if you give me credit for the Master
.- hmm ... I'm not buying Shari
Shari .- well have an appointment if you give me information
Master .- really want it, agree, you have it up from his desk whispers

continued ...

Chapter3: Shari

knocked out

Master .- Well, there's not much this woman has escaped from the hands of the FBI that means that it takes many years to come out United States or came as a ghost
Shari .- reports say it was a woman with a baby, with primary studies, and provide them haha you should escape the FBI is not what I thought Master
.- tease but you've been in that time you had not been
Shari .- I never underestimate
Master Master .- I do not, I have a hunch that this woman walks involved with one of the mobsters more power in all of U.S.. Shari
.- you mean the most influential, powerful is if they have magical powers
you always correcting Master .- .- Shari
and your always so useless. Master
.- Shari
start again we started
Master .- .- not pass or 3 minutes and start to bother me that delicate
.- Shari says sarcastically
Master .- just have a mouth Macbride very loose so you can cause many problems, why you out of the academy to start
Shari .- 1 .- If I finish my course where it was kept in the head, second I'll see if I get in trouble and three and more important what I do with my words is not your ....- incumbent could not continue to be daring to kiss her but when she slapped
separate Master .-
not change anything Shari Shari .- neither you nor who gave you the right to kiss me? Master
.- go, note that even you liked
you speak Shari .- ¬ ¬
Master .- flush tells me to come out of your cheeks
Shari .- ¬ / / ¬ I think you've drunk way too
Master .- ..... that better not go to my apartment, there will be more comfortable
Shari .- always to the point really ... but if you sleep, take a week and take off your hideous perfume
Master .- Well, my door is still open to you my dear, "says felt more comfortable and up your leg to your knee
Shari .- thanks for the report- says taking it from the table, a yellow folder
.- Master of all, it was a pleasure to dine with you Macbride, eat lobster for the next
Shari .- ja-added with sarcasm out of there as Master viea her beautiful figure distinguished himself by the beautiful red dress fitted I had, in that it was when the phone rang-say .... a asecinato, go there, "he says turning off the phone and leaving restaurant

stupid .- Master Shari says up to jetta blue and putting it in gear when her phone rang she lit a special button on the cell had Donca
connected "Tell me .- Shari Shari
you discovered
Donca .- .- not much, a dispute over drugs, the Sommers family Groom annoying for poor and helpless relative, and that's your
Shari .- I Masters dinner with a repulsive
Donca .- TT esooo I will certainly tell you in the car
Shari .- oo ¬ ¬ ** that say stupid things, I give the report and remained in the restaurant is all ¬ ¬ **
ufff Donca .- vv ^ - ^ what a relief

u.รบ Donca Shari .- .- and something interesting? Shari
.- and not even read everything, but it informs you when you do, please alert understood anything clear

Donca .- .- Shari well ... Adios, "he says turning off the cell
Donca .- always so warm. _. He says turning his

  • Yes, definitely died of a heart attack

Master .- and told me it was a murder that had clowns do not come here

    wait
  • Mr Master even more, it stops CORONER

.- Master in question?

  • Look at this, "he says by showing what looked like a cut with a razor

Master .-..... I see nothing ... there ..... a moment ... has a sting in the jugular

  • if

Master .-..... I miss, I just remember a asecinato like this .... is ...

  • if Mr Master, stand our friend "no trace" was here, and is the same pattern

Master .- if .... ruled that it did not cover asecino to be a serial, because their victims were only three

  • now 4
  • Mr.

Master .- yes, this kind ... cover their tracks, stand normal deaths .... but have been so few .... I think this is no serial asecino ... interest is

  • will want to hide something

Master .- if ...... inform me of what happens .... I have to go somewhere out of there, "says

  • sir ... where it goes?

None of your business .- Master

Shari her in his office was reviewing the report that Master had given him and drank a cup of coffee, it was certainly intesante, that woman Mary Ane Sommers, a woman was not told it was an intelligence criminal, Shari is thought that perhaps there was only a victim of the consequences of any act by accidental esena tracks in the crime, if there was anything good, only she could know what was really happening, would have to investigate all persons to resemble anything in the description in it. Well work something qeu Shari loves was a difficult case and no matter what happened she would find that woman, this case would be solved I loved the challenge. They knocked on the door and Shari looked through the small hole to see who it was was a young woman with a strange glasses, was a very elegant woman in front of his apartment. Shari

.- being offered

  • Macbride Miss Shari?

Shari .- if

  • come from his assistant Donca, he is in the hospital and wants me to see

says Shari .- Donca and is about to open the door a moment Donca not in the city, besides the Mrs. not stop someone from the hospital, I have a phone by speaking ... Something fishy here-it-now pienza open-Shari opens the door to see what it was-go girl, "she says quietly, and she goes and sits looking at every detail of the apartment

forgive me Shari .- This is not ordained and had a job, "he says, pulling out his gun and head LISTED

  • parese not a little paranoid behavior

Shari .- you could say that if you miss, but he knows something. .. I just talked to Donca ... I do not think that is in the hospital .... to come to

  • as vera ... Miss ...... I think it's best to drop his gun before that something bad happens, "he says

Shari .- now threatens me," he says confidently when something hits it and get an electric shock and she falls to the ground paralyzed

  • women go, here's the money, "says a man and she runs off taking the money

Shari could not talk could not scream, I was paralyzed by what had attacked from behind, could not movers at all only saw a man approaching her could not see his face.

  • well Miss Macbride, I think it will not solve this case as much as I wanted, want to know something ... it was nothing personal, the guy who was killed in his office was very inprudente as you, well the only thing I need is to kill, do not mind right?

Master .- me if he says pointing his weapon, "do not move," but it was later the subject is cast out and hit the wall by pulling against Master'm stunned while the other man ran as fast as he could and away from your reach, Shari are you okay? - she just looked at him I could not move his mousculos in fact not even know if I would be well-neglect, I will call an ambulance
Shari Shari .- How ironic life ....- I never thought thought- Master ... I would save some time

continue ...


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